Shop More Submit  Join Login
×

:icondarklight-the-hybrid: More from DarkLight-The-Hybrid


More from deviantART



Details

Submitted on
November 10, 2012
File Size
124 bytes
Link
Thumb

Stats

Views
229
Favourites
3 (who?)
Comments
5
×
LOL IM GAY
This is how Usher joined The Destroyers.
Add a Comment:
 
:iconsnivy-fan:
OMG my first critique. Okay here goes nothing.

I really like how you described usher. He is a very complex character. I also like the scene it's just perfect for the scenario. You also let me picture the scene in my head it was wonderful and your words fitted the story completely. I have always loved your stories but this one is by far the best. It's so mysterious how usher loves and hates her at the same time. I so will tell everyone i know to read this.It's such a touching story. keep up the good work and i hope you enjoy this first critique.
What do you think?
The Artist thought this was FAIR
4 out of 5 deviants thought this was fair.

The Artist has requested Critique on this Artwork

Please sign up or login to post a critique.

:iconanminster:
anminster Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013
Where is the text?
Reply
:iconmariokid2012:
mariokid2012 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
wow....beutiful
Reply
:icondarklight-the-hybrid:
DarkLight-The-Hybrid Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Critque? Pwease?
Reply
:iconmariokid2012:
mariokid2012 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i'm so sorry. i'm not that good a typer for critque's.
Reply
:icondarklight-the-hybrid:
DarkLight-The-Hybrid Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh okay
Reply
Add a Comment: